CAMP POEM
Yummy dinner
Encouraging people
Awesome fun
Really safe
Super exciting
Ipad’s recording
Xtra friendly
Cute cat
Amazing time
Muddy lake
Peaceful day
By Sisilia
Really safe
Super exciting
Ipad’s recording
Xtra friendly
Cute cat
Amazing time
Muddy lake
Peaceful day
thats cool
ReplyDeleteGreat poem
ReplyDeleteI love your poem it was cool!
ReplyDeleteHi Sisilia! We love your poem about camp. We like how you used Xtra instead of extra. What kind of poem was it?
ReplyDeletethat's so true. You did a amazing job on the poem about camp.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem you have wrote I liked how you wrote down words related to CAMP 2017!
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem and I hope When Im a year 6 i could do that to.
ReplyDeleteHey that was a really good poem hopefully you make another poem. I like the way you used details and rhymes.From trishant and mclaren
ReplyDeleteI like the poem because it is very colourful.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it has more then five ideas and it really gives me the imagination of camp. Did you have fun at camp?
ReplyDeleteI hope you had so much fun.
Was the cat toby or a another cat?
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem, and the colors. What was your highlight????
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem Sisilia!!!! you have such awesome words.
ReplyDeletei really love the bright colours.
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool peom
ReplyDeleteWe love your poem. It sounds fantastic .WE liked how you used adjectives.
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